2. The feedback that I got on my past elevator pitch was that I needed to have more gestures and be more animated. Other than that, I had very positive feedback.
3. This time I tried to use some hand gestures and be more animated. It was hard because I normally do not talk like that. Other than that, I just tried to be enthusiastic about everything I was saying.
I really liked your elevator pitch! I am the same way as you. I do not use my hands or gestures like your suppose to in speeches in everyday conversation. You look very confident and know exactly what you are trying to say and deliver it. You nailed it! Great post.
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ReplyDeleteGreat pitch and great idea. I’m personally always losing my phone or my keys so this would actually be very helpful. I’m glad you took other constructive criticism and applied it to your pitch. If I wore to suggest anything it would-be to just write your pitch and practice it once or twice before you record it. Other than that you were well spoken, to the point and professional.
If you would like to check out my post here is the link!
http://blogpostsbyalo.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Sarah, I really enjoyed both your pitch and your idea! For someone that is always losing their car keys around the house, I would definitely be one of your first customers. I liked how you gave an in-depth description of what your product does and the different options that one has with its use. The only critique I would have is maybe to project your voice just a tad more, but other than that I thought it was a very successful and professional sounding pitch! Keep up the good work! Check out my pitch here:http://brycesharrold2.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no3.html
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